amari_z: (autumn glow)
amari_z ([personal profile] amari_z) wrote2006-01-12 03:25 pm
Entry tags:

King Arthur Drabble: Unbreakable

Title: Unbreakable
Word Count: 100
Warnings: None
Character/Pairing: Tristan (!)
Challenge: For [livejournal.com profile] ka100 challenge 19: drabble on drabble. Written in response to [livejournal.com profile] scout_lover's drabble The Pact.


Tristan had believed the end of the knights’ service to Rome would dissolve all bonds. What else, after all, had tied Tristan to the others? But as they depart the Wall together, he has no thought of slipping away to go forth alone.

Even the parting they had assumed they had chosen is not to be. After the knights silently reach accord, Tristan sets free his hawk and realizes the long years, the ties of blood and pain, are not so mutable.

Perhaps some bonds cannot be broken in this life.

He will yet see what change death might bring.



[identity profile] scout-lover.livejournal.com 2006-01-20 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, amari, I love this! What a wonderful extension of my drabble!

Perhaps some bonds cannot be broken in this life.

He will yet see what change death might bring.


Perfect! And lovely. And I love how you picked up on all of them deciding at once, without a word spoken, to stay. I always have to cheer at that part (g).

Beautifully done!

[identity profile] amari-z.livejournal.com 2006-01-20 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
Hee. It means a lot that you liked it! I was looking through the community's memories and your fic hooked my attention.

Yes! I love that moment of unspoken communication--it says so much about the knights' relationship.

Thanks for reading! : )