Re: Haunted (KA)

Date: 2006-05-09 10:34 pm (UTC)
I’m glad you enjoyed it. : )

One slight demur: surge of adrenalin comes across as anachronistic, although I'm not sure what the period-appropriate medical term would be.

No idea either, but you make a good point—I’ll have to think of another way to express this.

And a few typo alerts:

D’oh. Yes. Thanks so much for taking the time to point them out.

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