Date: 2009-03-17 02:31 am (UTC)
God, first off, a huge apology for taking so long to read this. And secondly, wow. I can't even begin to pick my favorite section. I can picture the huge group of knights and the total throwndown easily; the best thing I love about your stuff is the random little sides that happen to grab me.

He ground his forehead against Arthur’s shirt and then with a snarl, forced himself to sit up.

For some reason, I can almost hear Lancelot's hair on Arthur's clothing. It's extremely visceral for some reason.

Of course you have me wanting more and wondering. Very tight and exciting read and I'm so very glad to have been on the ride this whole time.

Enjoyed it a lot, and so very well done. :)))
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