Yay! I was so excited to see this posted, but I wanted to wait until I had enough time to read it :). I love the fact that despite Lancelot only appearing in one scene, it's still all about him - the others trying to judge how he's going to react, what he's going to do. I also very much enjoyed Guinevere's bit of POV. I like her, and I think you characterisation of her is fascinating. In a way I feel sorry for her - she lived a life with a man who didn't love her, in order that he be King of her land. And then she's got those feelings for Lancelot...I just can't wait to see how you're going to resolve it.
The only problem is that I'm sure I had it all figured out, and knew what was going on, but now I'm completely lost again :D. Looking forward to the next part!
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Date: 2009-02-28 11:19 pm (UTC)The only problem is that I'm sure I had it all figured out, and knew what was going on, but now I'm completely lost again :D. Looking forward to the next part!