So I don't remember reading Errant, and I went back and did that, and just...oh man are these ever painful. Beautifully realized and written, and I love the idea of building up a castle that won't see battle until Lancelot's gone, but still, ouch. Poor poor Lancelot, and Arthur, man, I have no sympathy for him (for his dead child, yes, but for his asshole-ness, no). I always wished Lancelot would have lived after that silly movie, but this seems like a fate he would not have wanted. And still, just, guh. You have such a way with words. Even a little moment in time like this (and based off of a puzzle even, which does look like awesome fun, btw) and you flesh it out and it's just so captivating. Thank you so much!
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Date: 2008-06-28 08:01 pm (UTC)