ext_36393 ([identity profile] dea-liberty.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amari_z 2006-05-10 05:17 pm (UTC)

I like this a lot! It's gorgeous...the lingering regret and need and... GAH!

I also love the way this can be read as the ghost being real or it not being real. I finished reading Turn of the Screw just lately, so that was one of the most striking things about this piece to me. It works both ways ^_^

I adore the ghost's first lines. It's still so typically Lancelot that it's just...wow. It's very powerful...and well, it leaves me both happy and sad - because Arthur is never alone - but always, always lonely. Good job, love. I adore this.

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