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2006-05-09 10:34 pm (UTC)
Re: Haunted (KA)
I’m glad you enjoyed it. : )
One slight demur: surge of adrenalin comes across as anachronistic, although I'm not sure what the period-appropriate medical term would be.
No idea either, but you make a good point—I’ll have to think of another way to express this.
And a few typo alerts:
D’oh. Yes. Thanks so much for taking the time to point them out.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Re: Haunted (KA)
One slight demur: surge of adrenalin comes across as anachronistic, although I'm not sure what the period-appropriate medical term would be.
No idea either, but you make a good point—I’ll have to think of another way to express this.
And a few typo alerts:
D’oh. Yes. Thanks so much for taking the time to point them out.
Thanks for reading and commenting!